Sometimes I write a poem and after sitting with it for awhile I rip it up and see what I can salvage…
This is a poem that WAS finished, but NOW is being deconstructed to be remade into something new and hopefully better.
Also, this is what you get when I lose track of time, get tired and need to do something. A deconstruction of a finished poem.
Tear it down... I remember Walking in the sand and sun. Had I considered your lovely face the reality Looking In my mind with a happy smile Back then I never considered they never end.heart Now looking back I wonder how Those times might end so soon Maybe it would have been different. In the darkness you stroll out of my life when You were good for me but was I for you? But I continue Happily And so it seems we’ll never know. to remember. think on our moments. light at Laughing on a rainy afternoon ©2021 Tim Geoghegan All rights reserved.
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