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Day 7 – Dodoitsu?

It was a great day and I actively avoided writing all day! I know! What an inspiration, right? Well… here’s a last minute Dodoitsu which is a four line poem. Each of the first three lines have seven syllables and the fourth line has five syllables. I couldn’t find any requirement for rhyme or meter, other than the syllable counts. I love the police activity page that they put in the paper, there are lots of interesting things to spark creativity there.

Visitor

I just wanted to see you
so I thought I would stop by.
I knocked… you didn’t answer.
Why’d you call the cops?

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Well… that’s one week down.

Cheers!

2 Comments

  1. Amy

    Does the blog site tell you when people stop by or do you only know if they leave a comment? Does it feel like throwing your poems out into the void?

    • Tim

      It gives me a general sense of numbers of stops, but I don’t collect any personal info so I only know details if people say hi. I decided to reestablish the blog when I decided that I’m writing for me. If other’s show up and enjoy it… that’s a bonus. Thanks for commenting Amy! 😉

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